Hot Pink Shorts

PS: I'd suggest adding music to the intro, but I dig your writing. Good job. Love the "Lick my tie." Very original--culture commentary is always a great thing. :)

Robogordon - Dipstick would love this! Way to go.

You lost me at the "Windsor knot".

Really like this concept, think it will work well as a short film format.

Agree with John and Closer. Beautifully written. Need to bring the visuals up to level of the written words and this would go far for sure. Great idea. First time I have seen anything on this. :)

This pitch is very unique and I like it. good job! I agree with John, would need a lot of visuals. The spoken pieces are very interesting, but yes, they would need equally dynamic visuals to hold the viewer's attention

thanks! and John I totally agree, to make a longer piece would require more dynamic visual images for variety and to hold the viewers attention.

Your writing is poetic. I like this pitch and like its uniqueness. The challenge here would be to hold the viewers attention.

I like that robogordon is investigating a powerful symbol and its personal meaning- already intrigued.
Additional nuance and emotional flavour through spoken word elements, great!